Can anyone help me with ideas on what to add to this painting to make it more interesting? - Artists2artists Social Network2024-03-29T01:10:04Zhttps://artdeadline.ning.com/forum/topics/can-anyone-help-me-with-ideas-on-what-to-add-to-this-painting-to?groupUrl=critique&feed=yes&xn_auth=noThank you very much for that…tag:artdeadline.ning.com,2011-12-14:3077055:Comment:1163262011-12-14T00:09:02.622ZStephanie LeeAnn Brownhttps://artdeadline.ning.com/profile/StephanieLeeAnnBrown
<p>Thank you very much for that advice. </p>
<p>Thank you very much for that advice. </p> Just move on. It has it's own…tag:artdeadline.ning.com,2011-12-13:3077055:Comment:1161352011-12-13T22:29:00.564ZStef Duffyhttps://artdeadline.ning.com/profile/StefDuffy
Just move on. It has it's own charm, dont touch it, you have learned from it......don't be too self critical.<br />
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Just move on. Revisit the piece six months from now and you will see how much you have progressed.
Just move on. It has it's own charm, dont touch it, you have learned from it......don't be too self critical.<br />
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Just move on. Revisit the piece six months from now and you will see how much you have progressed. Thank you all for your sugges…tag:artdeadline.ning.com,2011-12-12:3077055:Comment:1159372011-12-12T16:05:25.390ZStephanie LeeAnn Brownhttps://artdeadline.ning.com/profile/StephanieLeeAnnBrown
<p>Thank you all for your suggestions. This piece has been one that i have had trouble with i did it from a photo i found and i thought it would be cool to paint it. It just hasn't really come together the way i had hope.</p>
<p>Thank you all for your suggestions. This piece has been one that i have had trouble with i did it from a photo i found and i thought it would be cool to paint it. It just hasn't really come together the way i had hope.</p> Maybe broaden the top of the…tag:artdeadline.ning.com,2011-12-08:3077055:Comment:1155282011-12-08T11:22:26.934ZLaurel Sternberghttps://artdeadline.ning.com/profile/LaurelSternberg
<p>Maybe broaden the top of the funnel cloud in the upper left corner. Also your bank of white clouds is too uniform. Clouds aren't one tone of white; they aren't white at all. Look at them more closely. They reflect all the colors around them, of the sun/moon light, the earth, whatever is going on that day. I think you need more highlights and shadows everwhere. This is very 2 dimensional.</p>
<p>Maybe broaden the top of the funnel cloud in the upper left corner. Also your bank of white clouds is too uniform. Clouds aren't one tone of white; they aren't white at all. Look at them more closely. They reflect all the colors around them, of the sun/moon light, the earth, whatever is going on that day. I think you need more highlights and shadows everwhere. This is very 2 dimensional.</p>