is the subject recognizable as what it is? - Artists2artists Social Network2024-03-29T15:55:39Zhttps://artdeadline.ning.com/forum/topics/is-the-subject-recognizable-as-what-it-is?groupUrl=critique&commentId=3077055%3AComment%3A141930&groupId=3077055%3AGroup%3A96152&feed=yes&xn_auth=noHi Andrew,
lovely technique,…tag:artdeadline.ning.com,2014-01-17:3077055:Comment:2021862014-01-17T16:41:50.298ZSara Newtonhttps://artdeadline.ning.com/profile/SaraNewton
<p>Hi Andrew,</p>
<p>lovely technique, great drama created by the tiny tree. Not quite sure I recognized the shape as a whale. Is it swimming away from us? I see one fin and some back details. Whales have very limited attributes, so if it is important to you for us to recognize it as a whale,punch up those attributes. </p>
<p>Thanks for sharing</p>
<p>Sara</p>
<p>Hi Andrew,</p>
<p>lovely technique, great drama created by the tiny tree. Not quite sure I recognized the shape as a whale. Is it swimming away from us? I see one fin and some back details. Whales have very limited attributes, so if it is important to you for us to recognize it as a whale,punch up those attributes. </p>
<p>Thanks for sharing</p>
<p>Sara</p> I still don't see a whale, ev…tag:artdeadline.ning.com,2012-07-26:3077055:Comment:1446302012-07-26T03:04:22.383ZBen Mickelsonhttps://artdeadline.ning.com/profile/BenMickelson
<p>I still don't see a whale, even after reading your description. I see a mad crow struggling under the weight of a goldfish. I don't think the tree helps if you are dealing with ocean life. Interesting piece though.</p>
<p>I still don't see a whale, even after reading your description. I see a mad crow struggling under the weight of a goldfish. I don't think the tree helps if you are dealing with ocean life. Interesting piece though.</p> I would not have recognized i…tag:artdeadline.ning.com,2012-07-05:3077055:Comment:1419302012-07-05T20:31:14.634ZTodd J. Krusehttps://artdeadline.ning.com/profile/ToddJKruse
<p>I would not have recognized it as a whale. I did not see a whale in the drawing until after i read your description and then looked for it. i would say make the mountain on the left lighter; it's too close in value to the whale. and then the whale's body seems a very odd shape. from the mouth back on the right side it's unrecognizable</p>
<p>I would not have recognized it as a whale. I did not see a whale in the drawing until after i read your description and then looked for it. i would say make the mountain on the left lighter; it's too close in value to the whale. and then the whale's body seems a very odd shape. from the mouth back on the right side it's unrecognizable</p>