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Maybe broaden the top of the funnel cloud in the upper left corner. Also your bank of white clouds is too uniform. Clouds aren't one tone of white; they aren't white at all. Look at them more closely. They reflect all the colors around them, of the sun/moon light, the earth, whatever is going on that day. I think you need more highlights and shadows everwhere. This is very 2 dimensional.

Thank you all for your suggestions. This piece has been one that i have had trouble with i did it from a  photo i found and i thought it would be cool to paint it. It just hasn't really come together the way i had hope.

Just move on. It has it's own charm, dont touch it, you have learned from it......don't be too self critical.

Just move on. Revisit the piece six months from now and you will see how much you have progressed.

Thank you very much for that advice. 


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