please critique

[Andrew Schlageter]

These are the three digital pieces I used to apply to a worldwide exhibition, and I'm using them as a model of where I need to improve.  I feel like these pieces demonstrate a good use of light and space, but the textures need to be much more descriptive and the pieces as a whole need better unification, as some parts look too choppy to fit or just rushed.  

This is what I found critiquing myself but I need outside eyes so I get a better idea of what I need to work on.  Please take a moment to critique these pieces, any constructive comments will be very appreciated.  Thank you 

[Andrew Schlageter]

[Andrew Schlageter]

[Andrew Schlageter]

[Jacqueline Fitzgerald Ruiz]

Andrew, I find all 3 pieces mesmerizing and were able to maintain my interest and intrigue. I very much enjoy the ''abstract'' perspective of most art genre. I'm left with a ethereal surreal intelligent interpretive pieces all stand independent of each other. My personal favorite is #1, the flow and almost serpentine movement to the piece allows me to revisit it repeatedly enjoying it each time.